Crushing It by Erin Becker [MG Review]

Posted 20 October 2024 in review /9 Comments

I received a free copy from the author.
Crushing It
by Erin Becker
Source: ebook/author
Published: 6 Aug 2024
Publisher: Penguin Workshop (PRH)

Length: 240 pages
Genre: Contemporary
Target Age: +10
Representation: Sapphic

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Summary πŸ’¬

On the soccer field, Magic Mel is in her element. She’s ready to lead her team to victory at the city championship in her new role as captain. Off the field, however, is a totally different story. Mel can’t get a handle on her class presentation, her friend group has completely dissolved, and her ex-friend-current-teammate, Tory, is being the worst. The only place she feels like herself is in her text conversations where she shares her secret poetry with BTtoYouPlease.

Tory McNally, on the other hand, is keeping everything together, thank you very much. So what if her mom is more preoccupied with her craft projects and new husband than her, or that she’s down to one IRL friend because of annoying, overly peppy β€œMagic” Mel? She’s perfectly fine, and even when she maybe isn’t, she’s got NotEmilyD to text with.

As the championships loom closer, everything around Mel and Tory starts to get more and more complicated: the dynamics on the field, the rift between their friend group, and, as they connect anonymously online, maybe even their feelings for each other…

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Review ✍🏻

I don’t seek out sports books but the last middle grade I read and reviewed here is also a sports book lol. So for comparison’s sake, I felt Crushing It is a bit less ‘sporty’ than Keeping Pace. The protagonists’ participation in a soccer tournament is a key plot point, but practicing and playing soccer doesn’t occupy too much page time. There’s a balance here that should satisfy both soccer fans and those who have never played before. Notably, both books also have a strong romance plot.

Where Crushing It shines is in its portrayal of the dynamic relationship between Mel and Tory. This is a friends to enemies to crushes story, an uncommon plot in middle grade (I personally can’t think of any other titles that feature this). Both girls have to contend with mistakes they’ve made in their friendships and the difficult yet necessary growth that comes from it – something many girls experience at this age.

It has been a minute since I read such an angry middle grade protagonist! And Tory’s rightly angry. Even though the reader may feel frustrated with Tory, I hope readers would either find relatability or gain perspective through her character – depending on whether they identify with Tory’s experience or whether they have a friend like Tory. I acknowledge readers may also find Mel irritating, with her puppy dog friendliness and seeming lack of ability to lead or take iniatitive, but Tory’s ‘meanness’ and anger may make her a clearer target for reader frustration. I can recall my own middle school experience with friends who had a lot in common with Mel and Tory. You love them but they can cause you a good amount of suffering at that age! Especially when no one really knows how to communicate with each other.

I was wary the story would withold the reason for Mel and Tory’s falling out for too long, but thankfully that wasn’t the case. I also enjoyed how the storyline unfolds with differences between which protagonist knows what, in terms of A) the root cause of their falling out, B) the true identity of her online penpal, and C) her crush on the other girl. It kept me invested to see how things were going to play out.

A few assorted notes to wrap up: Both Mel and Tory experience some family challenges, but they’re not as center-stage as in other middle grade stories. Chloe and Rima, the friends Mel and Tory turn to after their friendship breakup, are developed enough for their roles in the story. The poem about the alien scientist made me think of my favourite band Cloud Cult. See Alien Christ and other songs that may sound like silly little stories to begin with but actually provoke deeper thoughts. I ‘sung’ the poem as I read it, which I never do while reading.

The Bottom Line πŸ’­

I may not keep an eye out for middle grade sports book, but I do keep an eye out for middle grade queer books, and Crushing It hits the mark on both. With refreshingly flawed and realistic protagonists, the dynamic relationships in Crushing It make this a contemporary middle grade worth picking up.

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Further Reading πŸ“°

πŸ‚ Read an excerpt
πŸ‚ Author website
πŸ‚ Post by Erin @ Teen Librarian Toolbox about romance in MG fiction
πŸ‚ Reviews: Nicole @ Feed Your Fiction Addiction
πŸ‚ Related: For more sport-focused middle grade about girls working through tough changes, see Laurie Morrison’s Keeping Pace and Alyson Gerber’s Taking Up Space.

What’s your favourite friends to enemies to crushes/lovers story?
Did you play any sports growing up?

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9 responses to “Crushing It by Erin Becker [MG Review]

  1. Totally agree that Tory could have come across as a “mean” protagonist, but somehow Becker had me emotionally connecting to her early enough that I was rooting for her even when she had her flaws on full display. This actually really surprised me. And I loved that this book took some typical YA romance tropes and made them work well in a middle grade. Lots of MG readers are craving romance!

  2. I don’t know why, but I feel like I’ve been seeing more MG sports books lately. It’s probably a good thing, though, as it also seems like there’s been a real lack of them in recent years. Even so, I’m not particularly interested in soccer, so even though I’ve seen this one advertised, I haven’t picked it up.

      • I have noticed MG books are focusing a bit more on crushes than they used to. It seems like MG used to be considered as needing to focus on friends and YA was more for romance. But I like it. Crushes are a thing for tweens!

        • Very true! I’m starting to think, though, that I would like to see some MG that reflects my own tween crush experiences… ie lots of discussion between me and my girl friends and absolutely no action taken haha (apart from the rare unrequited confession). But I suppose that may be too realistic and boring to read about. πŸ˜‹

          • Well, yes… I don’t know many real-life middle school crushes that ended in a sweet hand holding moment. Just lots of whispering about who liked whom, haha. Maybe two people dated in middle school and I frankly thought it was a bit weird since we were all so young and it seemed unlikely to go anywhere. Like they wouldn’t be together still in high school or college, presumably.

  3. I’m not a fan of the enemies to lovers trope; if I hate someone, I will hate them until I die! I do look for sports books, because so many middle grade readers play sports. It’s also a good way to get characters together outside of school and widen the net for romances.

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